Thread:Lady Lostris/@comment-4357864-20130401174109/@comment-3026053-20130401181958

Well, you did show it to me the other day to take a look at, so that's what I did :-p Besides, in my mind, being an editor is about "correcting" the story as much as the actual writing. I see being an editor more as a beta-reader, really. And I just like to discuss fanon stories and their progression. The best ideas usually come forth or are perfected when talking them over. I have had it happen more than once that I found something completely brilliant, but found out it was not so brilliant after I told someone else ^^". Anyway, if you feel like I'm meddling too much, just say the word, cause it is your story after all.

Hmm, perhaps her heartlessness could be a secondary plot arc: her struggle to save not only her sister, but also herself from what she has become.

As for the image, you can still use that one on a chapter or something. Though personally, I tend to avoid images with faces, as that is yet another thing that pins your character down and thus restricts your own creative freedom a bit. Sure, appearances change, but if you show your readers a definite image, they'll always see your character more by the image than by your words.

Hehe, I am with you that you can have sex for sex, but what I meant by my comments was that you can't really have sex just for sex on the Avatar Wiki as it is an all ages site after all and a lot of people are very close-minded and would likely not even find it suitable that there is even a reference to sex on the site. That is just something that you have to keep in mind, but in the end you can of course do with it what you want.