Thread:Lady Lostris/@comment-4357864-20130401174109

Wow you definitely left some very helpful advice! I guess I'll just respond here.

I really like the title "Crossfire" and the slogan "They shaped my life, I'll end theirs." I do like the main image suggestion too. It's possibly better than the one I currently have, but for some reason I feel a bias inside of me for the latter. I do like the Yin-Yang concept though.

There was one part about the lines that I think I should've explained. You're absolutely right about some lines seeming purely heartless. Those ones will probably be used once she turns on the Fire Nation, because for them she actually holds a deeply seeded hatred. Also, part of the character development is that she becomes progressively darker as the story goes on. I suppose killing people will do that to you. Of course, I'm not necessarily going to use every line, I only wrote them down so I don't forget. If some are truly unusable, I just won't use it.

As far as the sex stuff goes, I was being a little facetious at some parts. I doubt I'll put that sodomy thing in. The lesbian scene isn't a "must have" but I disagree that there can't be sex for sex. Not everything has to be integral to the plot, at least in my opinion.

I had no idea you were going to become this involved. You really are more than just an editor! I appreciate it, don't feel like you have to do that, but it was really nice! 