Judging Contest Round 8

Depressed by Suzon99

 * Heavy subject
 * Cool twist right off the bat
 * Occasional run-on sentences or incorrect punctuation.
 * Slightly repetitive in the beginning
 * Very creative and thoughtful
 * Continuity errors: We know that female leader is Fire Lord.
 * Why is Amon good now? Why is he depressed?
 * Great dramatic irony: Korra endorses Amon
 * Saw ending coming, but it was still very dramatic

Glue by Sparkstoaflame

 * Interesting opening scene… and it didn't come back later…
 * Nice writing
 * Hmmm, man who's never experienced pain from benders joins Equalists without any questions asked?
 * He is terrorized by cop politely asking him to stop?
 * He is still determined to support movement he doesn't know anything about, and he's 11?
 * Anti-clamatic conclusion

Long Live the King by King Bumi's Heir

 * Nah

A Thousand Days by Bomochu

 * Meng being trained by Piandao? I dunno…
 * Love the days vs. years conversation
 * Good lesson from Piandao about life
 * and a nice reference to Aang
 * Not bad writing

The Walls Fall Down by IAmAnonymous

 * God I hate exclamation points in the narration
 * Weird narration style
 * Cool concept, though

Trick or Treat by ATLALOK

 * Fun idea
 * Using the wig of Asami's dead mother?!
 * Some funny moments, but kinda boring. Overall alright