Thread:Lady Lostris/@comment-4357864-20130520224004/@comment-4357864-20130528061226

Plot-wise, the prologue is done. I've written everything that I've planned to include. I haven't done any grammar sweep yet, so there are probably still a few errors in that department. Still, I figured I'd let you know that you can read now just so you have more time to read whenever you feel like it. If I get to editing before you read, great, if not, then you still have the plot to critique me on.

I wanted to ask one question, and I apologize if this is burdensome. I think I'll put the scene where Nalia is told she'll be an assassin and has a talk with Sozin in the next chapter. Do you think it's better to put that at the end of the prologue? That was originally the plan, but it's already pretty long as-is.